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Shepard Family Stories: Lineage

-Chapter Nine-


(The Presidium)

Velair puts her hands in the air as the Alliance soldiers fan out, surrounding her, various assault rifles and pistols all are aimed at her head and chest. "Now now boys. I'm not gonna resist. But would you mind telling me why you are pointing lots of guns at me?"

"Lieutenant Shepard? We are going to ask you to come with us. Please don't resist, no one wants any bloodshed here today."

"I'd like to speak to Captain Chellick first….if you don't mind."

A glint catches her eye, causing her to look up. What she sees brings a smile to her face. The sergeant motions to one of the soldiers, "Restraints, now."

The soldier holsters his weapon and he brings out a set of black cuffs. Elle gives him a smile and puts her hands out for him, "Don't worry, I don't bite."

He leans in and in a low whisper mutters, "I know that Elle. Get ready to fight." 

Elle gives him a skeptical look until she takes a good look at the visor, immediately recognizing the man underneath the helmet. The man chuckles quietly, "…..go."

Concussive rounds strike the two soldiers behind her, startling the rest of the group. Elle makes her move, she leaps forward, pushing off her ally. She barrels into the sergeant, dropping him to the ground. She flashes him a quick grin before twisting to dodge a baton strike from the nearest guard. A quick jab to the throat incapacitates the offending guard. More concussive rounds fall like rain, striking soldier after soldier, causing the remaining guards to take cover under awnings, and inside doorways. Velair gives them a mocking salute and takes off running towards the shuttle bay. She stops short as she notices Captain Chellick leaning against a C-SEC shuttle. He sighs quietly as she reaches him, "You really make my job more difficult, you know that?"

"I'm sorry sir. This wasn't my intention."

"*sigh* I know that Lieutenant. That's why I called in a favor."

"I noticed that, I appreciate you getting his help."

Her ally jogs up beside her, removing his helmet, revealing the dark skin and short black crewcut of Jacob Taylor. "It's the least I can do for my favorite niece."

"Save the charm Uncle Jacob. We're not clear yet. You coming with us sir?"

Chellick shakes his head and steps away from the shuttlecraft, "No, someone's gotta make sure that these Alliance morons don't follow you. Get going kid….and good luck."

Velair gives him a quick kiss to the cheek, "Thanks so much sir. It's been an honor to work with you."

"Don't thank me yet Elle. Things are getting so far out of control that you might wish you went with the Alliance. Now get going, I'll stall them as long as I can."

"I understand, come on uncle. Let's go pickup my guardian angel."

The shuttlecraft roars to life, taking to the skies. The Alliance soldiers surround the captain, the sergeant putting a hand to his earpiece, "Captain Chellick helped her escape. What are your orders ma'am?"

"Relieve him of his command and bring him in for questioning. Send a squad to the docking bays to cut them off." 

"Acknowledged."

The sergeant sighs to himself, "I'm sorry Captain, but we're taking you into custody for obstructing an Alliance operation."

"You all should be ashamed of yourselves…….trying to bully a young lady like Velair. I expected better from the Alliance."

"I'm just following orders."

"Doesn't matter son. A good soldier should know when an order is flawed. Think for yourself you idiots. This is much bigger than all of us."

"I'm sorry sir, but you will come with us."

"No……I won't."

A handful of tiny silver spheres tumble from his grasp, rolling across the floor towards the soldiers. Clouds of smoke and blinding flashes of light erupt from the spheres disorientating the guards. The sergeant barks orders to his men, but has no idea if his words are heard. Once his vision clears, Captain Chellick is nowhere to be seen. "Goddammit." 


(Docking Bay B30)

Garrus and Velair rush toward the Turian cruiser, Jacob bringing up the rear. The airlock door opens to reveal Kasumi standing there with a huge grin on her face, "What took you guys so long?"

"Don't start with me Kas."

"Come on Garrus. Is that any way to talk to the person who kindly got your wife out from under the Alliance's noses?"

"She's on board?"

"Yep, she's in your quarters."

Garrus rushes past Kasumi. Velair embraces her aunt, hugging her tight. "Thank you so much for coming."

Kasumi returns the hug in kind. "Don't worry about it kiddo."

"Did Kim and Ari make it?"

"Yep, both safe and sound."

"Goddess, that's a relief."

"Well then, all aboard. You coming Jacob?"

He shakes his head, "Someone's gotta keep an eye on things here. Don't worry about me, I'll pass on any info I come across. Take care of yourselves."

Kasumi frowns playfully, "Aww….I was hoping to watch you work out again….for old time's sake."

"*sigh* I'm married Kas."

"So? Doesn't matter to me."

Velair gently nudges Kasumi inside. "Okay Aunt Kasumi……time to go."

"Aww….come on….I wanna flirt some more."

"We're running for our lives."

"……oh yeah…….fine."

A few minutes later, the cruiser detaches and takes off away from the Citadel towards the relay. Jacob watches them leave, his smile fading from his features, to be replaced by a grave expression. He puts his hand to his earpiece, "They just left. No…..no real problems eluding the Alliance………yeah, the tracker was planted on her…..I understand.....Tell Hades that I've done my part. Operative Taylor...out."


Sorry guys that this chapter took so long. Work has been crazy, hot and humid. I hope you all enjoy.

Special thanks to my beta-testers as always! (BlackLion, Vierna, LiquidFire, LG, and JuneSide)
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liquidfire101 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist
Woah woah Jacob is helping Hades.....oh this chapter just added some major stuff lol. Seriously amazing stuff you got going so far and looking forward to reading the rest!
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
:evillaugh: Yep.....jacob......traitor....or so it seems :evillaugh:
Just wait until the others find out (dun dun dun :XD:)
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liquidfire101 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist
Nothing is ever as it seems I feel. lol way to get the dun dun dun in there =). Oh I feel the others will not be happy campers at all.
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
Got one scene in my head for the discovery of Jacob's treachery.........my readers are going to flip the heck out..........hell, I'm kinda wigging out about the thought :giggle:
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liquidfire101 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist
lol oh boy.....the jaws theme is coming to mind haha.
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
..........appropriate........:D
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liquidfire101 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist
I thought so too lol. =)
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Lilaaku Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm guessing there's a reason Jacob's doing some work for Hades? He seems reluctant enough.

This chapter seemed kind of short to me for some reason, but there was plenty going on ^^ I liked Kasumi here (I've started to really like her since I've gotten her on my team; she's so cool :D ). I'm starting to wonder what's going on with Kaycee and Aya though...
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
Check the mainframe for a little more ;)

Just a tad short. I wanted to end the chapter on that twist to really surprise everyone. Kaycee and Aya are landing on Tuchanka. I wanted to show what's going on for everyone, not just Kaycee and Aya.

Just wait until you see what happens. Things are about to get .......complicated.
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Lilaaku Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know I'm probably not meant to, but I keep picturing Kaycee and Aya as the main characters of this story ^^; I know they've gone to Tuchanka, but... I kind of get attached to central characters and want to find out what's happening to them most when reading a story, even if there isn't much reason to think there's much going on involving them.

But things have been complicated before, right? :aww: I'm sure they'll make it through. Can't wait to read the next chapter :D
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
That's fine, I just try to show what's happening with the WHOLE Shepard family :giggle: That doesn't just mean Liara/Kaycee and the girls, it means their extended family too. :)

The other purpose is to show where everyone is after the time gap. :D

Oh you haven't seen complicated yet ;) Glad you're excited!
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Vierna-Drottingu Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awwww Kasumi, always the flirt :D

heh nice choice on the traitor... I never really liked him x)
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
BlackLion's the only one who figured out why Jacob's doing this.
But we'll have to see how far he'll have to go XD.

and of course she wants to flirt with the married man :giggle: If her haiku's are anything to go by. Not to mention she cloaked and watched Jacob work out for hours on end.......kinda....stalkerish :rofl:
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Vierna-Drottingu Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha I figured you'd do something like that, after our talks about possible traitor... but until I read BL's comment, I thought he switched sides coz he wanted to (what can I say, I really, really don't like him and am ready to belive the worst about him xD) x)
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
But we still don't know how far he's gonna go. ;p

I loved the idea so much but I couldn't figure out the right time to show it....but now......well...let's just say things are gonna get......complicated XD
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Vierna-Drottingu Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no no no, don't say anything, I wanna read it myself :D
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
XD okay :D
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LightningGalaxy Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist
Ugh.... I've always hated Jacob, now I despise him even more.
Hatred aside, this is a fantastic chapter. :D Well done!
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
Don't be too hard on him....yet :XD: We'll have to see how far he goes.
:hug: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Sorry it took so long ^^;
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LightningGalaxy Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist
Ha-ha! Alright, I'll wait and see.
Don't be sorry, it's perfectly fine to take your time. :D
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
It's gonna be crazy! :D
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BlackLion310 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoa, curveball o_o! So Tartarus took Jacobs family? Evil.
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
Bro, you are the only one who's figured that out so far :D You keep reading my mind XD.

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BlackLion310 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well there's gotta be a damn good reason Jacob would betray his comrades but don't tell me anymore i wanna read what happens next! :D
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012
Okay lips are sealed :D
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michaelshand09 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Jacob???!!! NOOOOOOO!!!!!
SaintWalker'; sir your penchant for keeping me on the edge of my seat has once again struck!!!!
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
:evillaugh: I had the idea pop into my head as I was working. I knew it would be the perfect twist for a chapter. Also if you think that will keep you on the edge of your seat, just wait until you see what I got planned :evillaugh:
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smith808 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
WHAT JACOB IS ON THEIR SIDE......DAMN THIS IS GETTING GOOD
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
Cheers bro! :D

also.....:evillaugh: That is a good question XD
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smith808 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
can't wait.....NO REALLY I CAN'T WAIT ITS SO GOOD
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
:happybounce: Glad you're excited! :D
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knight-101 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
what is jacob doing, nice chapter:-)
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
Good question....good question :evillaugh:

Thanks!!! :D
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bloodelf3 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Plot twist!
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
:evillaugh: Yes.....yes it is :evillaugh:
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BlueDemonX Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
seems like it...now I wonder if hes a double agent or if Hades has his family or something...
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villafj Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
And you've just added another reason to why I dislike Jacob. *sigh*

Great Chapter though.
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
Don't be too hard on him....yet ;)
Who knows what will happen...:evillaugh:

:hug: Glad you liked it!
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villafj Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can understand why he did it. I'm more disappointed in him, really. This will bite him in the ass.

But it still adds to the list of why I dont like Jacob Taylor. Of any sort of fictional form.
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
Oh....you have no idea :XD: He's gonna certainly pay for this :D

I felt this was the best way to give his character that extra oomph to show more depth.
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Maman-Ourse Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Jacob, i don't like you.
Btw it's another good chapter, the Shepards & more are gathering, it's nice!
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
I figured this would be a perfect way to put him in the story and make his character better. Really expand on who he really is....you know? :XD:

Yep, but who knows if they'll all be able to reach Tuchanka, or will they have to find an alternate place to hide :evillaugh:
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