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(Part One): Trick-Or-Treaters

"Liara, honey. The girls are almost ready. How's it coming with your costume?"

Liara Shepard looks at herself in the mirror, the long black dress hugging her curves, a wide-brimmed pointed hat resting on the counter. With the black lipstick and eyeshadow she doesn't recognize the woman looking back at her in the mirror. "I'm not so sure about this Kaycee. I'm not usually one for putting on costumes."

Kaycee's voice sounds from the bedroom, a note of laughter in her tone, "Everyone agreed to dress up this year, and that includes you dear. Besides, I can't wait to see you in the costume I got you."

"Isn't this a little......racy to take the girls out Trick-or-treating?"

"Kinda the point Liara. Plus, Kim's offered to help watch the girls afterwards while we go to the party."

Liara gives a sigh as she puts the hat on, transforming the demure archeologist into a living breathing witch. As she exits the bathroom, Kaycee gives a low whistle as she begins undressing Liara with her eyes, "Liara.............wow."

Liara shifts uncomfortably, "I'm not sure this is really.....me."

Kaycee's costume is a long black and red cape over a skintight red dress, a pair of false fangs in her hand. She gets off the bed and gives Liara a hug, "That's the whole point. Halloween is the one time of year that you get to be something you're not. You can get all sexy and wild with no repercussions."

She leans in close and whispers in her ear before placing a sensual kiss on her neck, "Also, I can't wait to get you out of this later tonight."

"Ew dad. Could you please not do this with us around?"

Ayrene stands in the door, her little sister Syren holding her hand. Aya, clad in an N7 hoodie and jeans shaking her head at the look of embarrassment on her mother's face. Syren's costume consists of a glowing pair of blue wings attached to her back, a glittering outfit of silver and green adorning her. Kaycee looks at her youngest daughter, "Sweetie, your angel costume look so cute!"

Syren grins at her daddy, "Grandma Hannah helped make it for me."

Liara looks at Aya, "And what are you going as?"

Ayrene strikes a dramatic pose, "I'm Commander Shepard, and this is my favorite costume on the Citadel."

Kaycee falls back on the bed rolling with fits of hysterical laughter, tears rolling down her cheeks, "Oh, oh....my sides hurt. Is that really what I sounded like Liara?"

"I think she's got you down pat."

Kaycee wipes the tears out of her eyes, "Well go get your sisters and meet us downstairs. We'll be heading out soon."

Aya gives her father a salute, while winking, "Sir, yes sir!"

As their daughters turn and head downstairs, Liara rests her head on Kaycee's shoulder, "She's growing up so fast......and she's definitely taking after you."

"That she is."

"Well, let's get going, we've got a long night ahead of us."

-Downstairs-

"Will you quit fidgeting Elle. I can't get this visor on straight if you don't sit still."

"Sorry Rin. I'm just too excited."

"Here Rin, let me do it."

Aya secures the homemade visor on the side of Velair's dark blue helmet, "There we go. The Dark Knight of Omega walks again."

"You think it works?"

"Uncle Garrus is gonna love it. Rin, your headpiece is all crooked, here.......tilt it to the right a tad......there. Justicar Rinyn I think you're ready for your mission."

Rinyn giggles, bringing a smile to her older sister's face. "Dad. Mom. You two ready to go?"

"Right here 'Commander'. Let's get going girls. Your aunts and uncles are waiting for us."

Syren pulls on her dad's dress slightly, getting her attention, "What's wrong Sy?"

"Who's gonna be at the party daddy?"

"Well, not everyone was able to make it tonight, but far as I know.....Aunt Miri, Uncle Garrus, Uncle James, Aunt Tali to name a few."

Aya pipes up, "Are Gabe and Cassie gonna be there?"

"Yeah, along with Kimmy. She's gonna take you all home after the festivities are over. Your mom and I will be staying a little later."

The knowing look on Aya's face makes Kaycee deeply uncomfortable, "Get your mind out of the gutter Ayrene Shepard."

The "innocent" look on her face doesn't fool her one bit, "Liara honey. Make sure to remind me to have words with Jackie and Zaeed.........and quite possibly Aethyta."

"Sigh..........Again? I thought they understood to not talk about those...."things" in front of her."

A voice comes from the front yard, "Shepards! Front and center!"

Syren's eyes widen in delight as she recognizes the voice. She squeals with delight and goes tearing down the front steps into a flying hug at her favorite uncle, Wrex. "UNCLE WREX!"

The krogan catches the little asari, lifting her onto his shoulder, his face covered in a greenish makeup with a pair of bolts taped to his neck in classic Frankenstein fashion. "Hey there Little Bit."

Kaycee leans against the doorframe, "What brings you by?"

"Miranda sent me to pick you all up......since you are all late for the party."

"Well then, let's not keep her waiting."

(Part Two coming soon)
I know it's been a bit since I've given you all an SFS story, but here you go! I hope you all enjoy! Part Two will come soon! :D
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Balto16 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Can't wait for part two.
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dra4chen Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on Come on
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dvn10301 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Gaaah! please write part two! I'm hooked to these stories. :XD:
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LightningGalaxy Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist
Ah! I love this so much.
"Ew dad. Could you please not do this with us around?" HAHAHAH
Shepard's family is so nice. I'm all envious now.
Can't wait till I read the second part, this story is amazing. :D
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Trying to figure out how to write the second part :XD: without getting too fluffy....even though that would be fun :D
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Funkifan Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Nice story! :D
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Elizabeth140455 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:iconawwwplz:
Syren is a little angel, so cute of cuttiest!!! *.*
Wrex with Frankenstein fashion :XD:
And Velair, Dark Knight of Omega :giggle:
Can't awit for the next part :squee:
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Yep :hug: Syren is the cutest thing ever! :love:

His scars gave me the idea for Frankenstein. :D

and absolutely, she respects her uncle that much! :D
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Elizabeth140455 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
So awesomeness :3
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HiveLordLusa Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love these costumes :meow: Can't wait for next part!
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
More costumes to come :D!!!!!! :squee:
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HiveLordLusa Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay!! :D
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Sillylilbit Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Wrex as Frankenstein? AWESOME!!!!
Great ideas for the costumes! Made me totally smile, and pretend like I was there!
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
His massive scars are what helped inspire me for his costume idea.

Thanks! :D I tried to pick appropriate ones :D

I always hope that the way I write my stories really makes you feel like you're standing off to the side, watching the events unfold :D
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Sillylilbit Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
I was totally there...hiding in the bushes, camera in hand! LOL
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
:O STALKER!!! :rofl:
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Sillylilbit Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Oh HELLZ Yeah!!!! Someone has to do it.....might as well be....ME!!! LOL
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
(<.<)............(>.>)
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Sillylilbit Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
I think I need to swap my lens out....I wanna do awesome macros of this family affair! Without getting brained! LOL
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
STALKER!!!!!!!!! :icondragonlaugh:
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
:O STALKER!!! :rofl:
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smith808 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
master story writter at his best
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Many thanks!!! :D
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james92046 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Now that is good.
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Cheers! Glad you like it! :D
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Aquarios69 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
"I'm Commander Shepard, and this is my favorite costume on the Citadel." :D
Hahaha Love it, i can't wait for more
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Just felt right, you know? :D

So glad you enjoyed it! More to come soon! :D
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ShadowGeek83 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Are Tali and Cassie going to be out of thier suits? and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE will ADL-art make this into a comic. Need to see sexy witch Liara and sexy vamp Kaycee 8O Also would like to see how cute the girls look dressed as thier favorite heros :)
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
In response to your first question.....maybe ;p You'll have to wait and see.

In terms of the comic, you'll have to ask ADL himself. :XD: I don't think he's planning on turning the new ones into comics, unless I want to commission it. He's stopping our collab at the 4th of July Special with Ash and Grunt.
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jerrydickerson85 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you never stop amazing me friend
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Cheers bro! :D
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jerrydickerson85 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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ADL-art Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
"The Dark Knight of Omega walks again..." *epic pose*

Love it :D
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Yep. (epic music begins in background) The Dark Knight of Omega................:icondragonlaugh:
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Maman-Ourse Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
:squee:
It's perfect! Aya like Shepard is awesome & funny! XD
Well done, can't wait for the part 2.
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
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So glad you liked it!!! :D Aya is quite the little firecracker....just like her father :D

Coming soon ;)
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michaelshand09 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Question good sir?
Will Wrex be in costume?
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
He's already in costume :D (He's dressed as Frankenstein) :D Just wearing his armor still. (It's described at the end of the chapter :)
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bloodelf3 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Gah! So much fluff! Great work as always
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Probably gonna have more fluff in part two :XD:

Thanks so much!!! :D
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michaelshand09 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Picturing Liara as a witch.......
Wow that is freaking sweet!
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
I tried to give them all appropriate costumes :D
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TheWonderingSword Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012   Writer
You can't have a party without Uncle Wrex! :D
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
No, you most certainly can't :D
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knight-101 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
this is cute, can't wait for more :D
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Glad you liked it!
Part Two will be the Halloween Party.......so many more characters will show up! :D
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Lilaaku Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You really didn't like my suggestions? D: ... :giggle: Hehe, I'm just kidding. It makes a lot of sense for the kids to dress up as the characters they admire most ^^ Good idea.

Aya definitely made me laugh here :D (does this mean I shouldn't be mentioning threesomes etc. around her too? :rofl: )

As much as I like Lineage, I think your SFS stories are still my favourites ^^ Can't wait to read part two.
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SaintWalker1806 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
I really tried to give them appropriate costumes.....I felt that to give them costumes outside the norm, would be odd. :XD:

Krogan HEADBUTT.........would be Kaycee's response! :D

I enjoy writing both, gives me practice writing two different types: Emotional/Romantic/cute stories and Action/Suspense/Drama on the other. :D
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